MERMAID MELODY PICHI PICHI PITCH Text translation, chapter 20. Original story by Yokote Michiko Manga artwork by Hanamori Pink Translation by Kotetsu, not to be redistributed without permission! Archived at http://www.boukenshin.net/pitch/ Translator's Notes: This is my first time translating a manga, and I'm not yet a very advanced student of Japanese, hence, there are bound to be mistakes. I tried my best to faithfully translate as much as I could, but there were parts where characters spoke using slang words that weren't in any of my dictionaries. Still, I think I got the gist of what I didn't understand. I didn't bother to translate sound effects, nor the words appearing on every sign, nor all of the [small text] words in the story. For purists, I know, this is a tragedy. But I chose to go for expediency, which means that I've translated only dialogue and *most* of the [small text] passages, at least the ones particularly cute and/or important to the story. I am also not entirely faithful to the punctuation in the original. Mainly, there are places where I have added punctuation, since the original Japanese dialogue consisted of long, convoluted constructions, which would not make sense in English without the addition of punctuation. Terms of address (like "Onee-chan," which means "Older Sister") and meaningless exclamations (like "Kyaa!") have also been left untranslated. ---------------------- Translation Key! This is spoken speech. [small text] comes before a translation of those tiny, scribbly words sometimes found floating inside or outside a word bubble. ** denotes a panel in which nothing is said. (1) is footnote #1. (2) is footnote #2, etc. Footnotes come immediately after the passages that they refer to. Pages are separated by a dotted line. ---------------------- MERMAID MELODY PICHI PICHI PITCH Episode 20 ---------------------- Kaito: I'm going to protect this girl! Gakuto: Kaito, you fool... Gakuto: Prepare yourselves. ---------------------- Mermaids: Sara: ......! Sara: That sort of song can't erase my suffering--- ---------------------- Sara: Sara: Mitsuki: Sara... Whatever happens to me is fine. I just don't want to make you suffer anymore. Sara: Sara: Written on music: "Remembrance" ---------------------- Mitsuki: Sara... Sara: Hanon: Tarou-chan!! Hippo: Hanon-sama, you mustn't go!! Sara: Ah... ---------------------- Mitsuki: Sara! No matter what sort of reasons there might have been, hurting you so much like this was my sin alone! No matter what I have to do, I want to make up for it...!! Sara: Mitsuki... How can you say that now... Now... Hanon: Sara... Even though Tarou-chan loves only you... This much... So deeply. Mitsuki: Sara... ---------------------- Mitsuki: Sara... Let's end this now. Since you wish for it, if it will make you happy, I offer my life to you. Sara: Mitsuki... Hanon: Stop! It can't be like that - you're wrong!! Hanon: Hanon: TAROU-CHAN!! ---------------------- Karen: The song... We can't hear it anymore? Rina: Even though Luchia is right beyond this door! Noel: Right now, let's believe. Believe in that song... and in everybody! Karen: Right. Rina: Yes... Yuuri: What a shame, isn't it? Eriru: This is the end for you, the e~nd, the e~nd. ---------------------- Gakuto: Why are you getting in my way? Why won't you take my hand? Gakuto: It's incomprehensible. Luchia: KAITO!!! Luchia: Kaito: Don't worry! You'll always be there, right? You said that you believed in me. Luchia: Kaito...?! ---------------------- Hanon: Tarou-chan...? Coco: Sara...? Hanon: No. Are they...? Coco: Sara?! Baaya: Sara-sama!! ---------------------- Sara: Mitsuki... I love you. And I'm sorry. Hanon: Sara's color... It's become orange! Hanon: Hippo! Take Tarou-chan to a safe place! Sara, I'll go on ahead of you! We need all seven of the princesses in order to defeat Gakuto! Hippo: Hanon-sama, please take this with you! Hanon: Thank you! ** ---------------------- Coco: Sara... Sara: Are you all saying that you trust me? Coco: Because we're friends... Right? Sara: Friends, huh... ---------------------- Gakuto: Since you want that mermaid, I'll give her to you, Kaito. Join your power with mine... Kaito: Ku... Gakuto: ...Guaa! Kaito: Absolutely not. Even if you make it so that I can no longer move, I'm still not such a docile, obedient child. ---------------------- Gakuto: ...You don't understand how our clan has suffered! Kaito: I can't understand! I'm only Doumoto Kaito. I'm not any other person! And that's my answer!! Gakuto: To refuse my invitation twice... is unacceptable. Just as you wished, I'll slice you up until you can no longer move... ** Gakuto: CHECKMATE. ---------------------- Kaito: Not yet! Luchia: ...Kaito! Kaito: Now's your chance! Hurry up and go! Luchia: But... Kaito: Hurry!! Kaito: Your friends... They're just beyond that door, aren't they? I'll be fine, so hurry up and go! Luchia: Kaito: Guaa! ---------------------- Luchia: KAITO!!! Gakuto: ...If you want me to stop, give me that pearl. Kaito: Don't! Don't give it to him!! Luchia: ---------------------- Eriru: Well, well. You don't have anywhere left to run. Mermaids: Mermaids: Karen: You mustn't give up your pearl! If you do that, then-- Rina: Karen... Luchia will never forsake Kaito. Noel: That's true. The peace that we wish for in the ocean, is not something that can come to be because of someone's sacrifice... Maria: You understand well, don't you. All you can do is say pretty words, but you can't really do anything at all. ---------------------- Gakuto: That's right... Good girl. Luchia: Kaito: DON'T! Luchia: Luchia: Aqua Regina: Mermaid princess Luchia. ---------------------- Aqua Regina: Is it truly all right for you to give up? You still have friends who still will not give up, don't you? Luchia: Friends?! ---------------------- Hanon: Luchia, thanks for waiting! Hanon: This thing is really amazing, isn't it! Maria: Na...! Eriru: You--!! Rina: Hanon, you're safe! Hanon: Well, yeah! But I was a little rude, I guess. Hanon-chan right now is a little bit scary! Kaito: And I, too. Just because I'm in a situation like this, doesn't mean that I'm beaten yet. ---------------------- Gakuto: Uwaaa...! Kaito: Uoooo! Gakuto: Na...! Where did that power come from?! It should have all been absorbed into me. Why...?! ** ---------------------- Kaito: There is someone that I have to protect, so I become stronger...! It's over, Gakuto. Gakuto: This is... One half of my power...? A bright and powerful aura... Luchia: Kaito...! ---------------------- Gakuto: The end, you said?! That's the only thing that I wish for. I'm the one who desires the end!!! Gakuto: Dark Lovers, follow me!!! Gakuto/DLovers: DARK ROSE FINAL STAGE!!!! ---------------------- ** ** Rina: That's... ** ---------------------- Rina?: SARA...! Gakuto: Na...! Sara: Let's not hurt anyone any more, Gakuto. Coco: Sara... Rina: That's the orange... Karen: We're all here...?! Noel: The seventh mermaid princess!! Luchia: Everyone, let's sing!! ---------------------- Gakuto: I WON'T LET YOU!!! Voices: Aqua Regina: That cannot be. Gakuto: Na! ---------------------- Gakuto: AQUA REGINA!!! Aqua Regina: The future is something that you open with your own hands and your own heart. Because the seven princesses have gathered together, Your believing hearts, your feelings of love, are stronger than anything else... Luchia: She's been resurrected...?! ** ---------------------- Aqua Regina: Now sing, a song of peace and love. ---------------------- Aqua Regina: Combine the melodies of the seven oceans...! Kaito: This is... the song of the princesses... Gakuto: Gu... I won't let you... I won't let you! Luchia: Gakuto... Your hatred is only hurting your own heart... Nothing can be born from that. No matter how sad you are, fate is not something that you can overcome by using violent, harmful power. ---------------------- Gakuto: Ku! Gakuto: Sara... Will you no longer return to me...? Sara: ...Gakuto... Gakuto: Everything has slipped from my hands...! Luchia: ! Somebody: LUCHIA!! ** ---------------------- Gakuto: SARA!!! Sara: Gakuto... Won't you end this pitiful battle? Gakuto: Pitiful battle...? Sara, is that what you truly have to say? Sara: Haven't you noticed yet? Everything that we did was only spreading sorrow and emptiness. Sara: Uu! Gakuto: Sara...?! Gakuto: That wound is--!! ---------------------- Hanon: That wound... Is that from when you protected Tarou- chan...? Sara: The key rod... Hanon: Right. Sara: So... Sing... And take courage from that song. So that in the end, we can carry out the final mission of the princesses. Sara: Thank you, Coco. You were truly my friend. Coco: No... Sara, you're going to re-create the seal with that key?! ...Wait! Hanon: You mustn't... Tarou-chan will be grieve for you! ---------------------- Aqua Regina: Sara will now atone for the sin that she has committed. That was a sin which can never be forgiven. However, it was perhaps a sin that anybody could have committed... Luchia, you are the one who can combine the hearts of the seven princesses into one. Together with your friends, think of Sara, and sing... Mermaids: ...Sara, receive this feeling! Sara: Thank you. Luchia. Coco. Hanon. Everyone... Gakuto: Sara... ** ---------------------- ** Sara: Gakuto... Why did you accept my seal without trying to use your rod? Gakuto: It's all right... Sara. When I lost that power, it was the end of this body as well... But more than that, when I lost your heart, even if I had won the world, I would have been all alone. Gakuto: It's warm... This is the warmth of your hope, isn't it. DLovers: Gakuto-sama...! ** Gakuto: You all... Even when you return to your original bodies, you still worry about me... ---------------------- Gakuto: ...My one and only brother, Kaito. Gakuto: After I was separated from you, I was raised alone as the king of the dark, deep ocean. I envied you. The storm in which your parents died was my signal... Sara was torn apart by love, and committed a grave mistake. I loved Sara... She shared my same yearning, and suffered from the same fate. I truly loved her. Gakuto: For Sara's sake, I didn't care what sort of tragedies I created, or who I might have injured. No matter how many kingdoms I destroyed, or how many lives I stole... But, of course, the end result of all of that was nothing... ---------------------- Gakuto: Kaito... I admit my defeat. You, too, were also fighting against your own fate, weren't you. Please... Take care of your princess. Kaito: Yes, Gakuto... No. Onii-san...! ** Gakuto: Goodbye, Sara... Sara: No. ---------------------- Coco: Sara... Baaya: Sara-sama...! Sara: Gakuto: Sara... Sara: Sara: Mitsuki: Sara... Aqua Regina: Gakuto's ocean will embrace them both in a peaceful sleep. Soon a new life will surely be born. The Princess of the Indian Ocean... Keep this, until the day when you will meet her again. ---------------------- Mermaids: Let us sing a song to pray for Sara's reincarnation. Right...! Song: If the wish is fulfilled Then what is waiting next? Song: Now this grand dream Will bring happiness until the wish is fulfilled Mermaids: Hippo: Yuuri-san... Song: When there is a battle, The meaning of love is questioned Song: A thousand stars are twinkling... Mitsuki: Sara... Song: Of course I'm just a girl! I cannot live in dreams alone Please foretell that I will be loved ---------------------- Kaito: Luchia. Song: Now, with myself full of hope Song: "Toward life beyond the dream"...---- Luchia: Kaito. ---------------------- [2-page spread] Kaito: At last, I've found you...! Luchia. Luchia: And... I'll never let you go again. ** Girl: Something is coming... Is it my prince...? To be continued in Volume Five.