MERMAID MELODY PICHI PICHI PITCH Text translation, chapter 12. Original story by Yokote Michiko Manga artwork by Hanamori Pink Translation by Kotetsu, not to be redistributed without permission! Archived at http://www.boukenshin.net/pitch/ Translator's Notes: This is my first time translating a manga, and I'm not yet a very advanced student of Japanese, hence, there are bound to be mistakes. I tried my best to faithfully translate as much as I could, but there were parts where characters spoke using slang words that weren't in any of my dictionaries. Still, I think I got the gist of what I didn't understand. I didn't bother to translate sound effects, nor the words appearing on every sign, nor all of the [small text] words in the story. For purists, I know, this is a tragedy. But I chose to go for expediency, which means that I've translated only dialogue and *most* of the [small text] passages, at least the ones particularly cute and/or important to the story. I am also not entirely faithful to the punctuation in the original. Mainly, there are places where I have added punctuation, since the original Japanese dialogue consisted of long, convoluted constructions, which would not make sense in English without the addition of punctuation. Terms of address (like "Onee-chan," which means "Older Sister") and meaningless exclamations (like "Kyaa!") have also been left untranslated. ---------------------- Translation Key! This is spoken speech. [small text] comes before a translation of those tiny, scribbly words sometimes found floating inside or outside a word bubble. ** denotes a panel in which nothing is said. (1) is footnote #1. (2) is footnote #2, etc. Footnotes come immediately after the passages that they refer to. Pages are separated by a dotted line. ---------------------- Narration: The mermaid princess, in order to meet with her beloved prince, traded her beautiful voice and her tail for a pair of legs. But the prince does not notice that the girl right in front of his eyes is the girl that he loves. This is because the girl lost her beautiful singing voice... Luchia: ---------------------- MERMAID MELODY PICHI PICHI PITCH Episode 12 ---------------------- Narration: We've shown up at a southern island!! Luchia: Wa---! What a beautiful beach! Hanon: Here is where Kaito-kun will compete in the National Championship, isn't it! He's pretty good! Hippo: But I don't understand why everyone has to be here to support him... Nikora-san is too nice! Nikora: Cheering at a surfing tournament? Okay! [small text] Because you worked really hard at your jobs at the beach house. Luchia: If you're complaining, then why did you come?! Girls: [small text] Kyaa! That boy's so cute! ---------------------- Rina: Even so, this beach is very peaceful. It's as if everything bad going on with *them* is just a silly dream. Hanon: ...Yeah. Luchia: [small text] Hanon: Hey, how do you think that purple mermaid is doing? Rina: ...... ---------------------- Kaito: Luchia! Did you just arrive today? Luchia: Yeah. Everyone's here to support you, so do your best! Kaito: Thank you. Flashback Luchia: Forget about it... Luchia: <...I wonder what he's thinking about what I said then.> ---------------------- Boy: Heey, you. You're using a nice board, aren't you. Boy: I'm Johnny Kawamoto! Last year's champion. Pleased to meet you, Doumoto Kaito-kun. Kaito/Luchia: Dazzling! Johnny: [small text] Ha ha ha ha! (1) (1) [The last "ha" is written with the kanji character for "teeth," which is of course read as "ha." It's a pun that means both that he's laughing arrogantly, and that his teeth are dazzlingly white.] Johnny: Is this cute girl your girlfriend? Luchia: Girlfr...?! Johnny: This year's Miss Mermaid, perhaps? Luchia: ---------------------- Johnny: Together with the surfing tournament, there's also a contest for girls. "Mermaid" is the title given to the winning girl. The surfing champion recieves a kiss from the "mermaid". Luchia: Johnny: I definitely want to receive a kiss from you. Luchia: Eh... ** ---------------------- Kaito: You're amazingly self-confident. But you have to win first. Kaito: Right? Luchia: Eh... Luchia: ---------------------- ** Hanon: Ta-da! Look, look! Paper: Miss Mermaid Contest Entry Form Name: Houshou Hanon (14 years old) B: 83 W: 56 H: 85 Hobby: Shopping Talent: Singing * Makeup Luchia: Rina: Hun, mermaid, huh? Hanon: As mermaid princesses, we absolutely have to enter~~! Rina: When you say "we," do you mean all of us?! Luchia: I'm going to do it!! It would be disgusting if Kaito was kissed by another girl!! Hanon, help me choose a swimsuit!! Luchia: Rina should do it, too. [small text] Since it's Rina, she won't be giving anyone a kiss. Rina: ---------------------- Servant: Sara-sama... Please stop acting like this.(2) It is because I am weak that I have allowed you to... (2) [Sara is written in kanji characters. Sa = sand, and Ra = silk gauze, or net.] Sara: You're pestering me again... Silence! Servant: Aah! ** Gakuto: Hu hu... Is the princess in one of her moods? Even though I said that we've found the whereabouts of the new mermaid... Gakuto: This sort of behavior is not becoming of someone with such beautiful hands... ** ---------------------- Izuuru: So- So then, that girl that saved them was the Princess of the Antarctic Ocean?! Izuuru: Eriru: What's wrong, Izu-tan? Izuuru: Stop talking that way. Maria: ...And then, Gakuto-sama must have summoned the survivors of the destroyed Antarctic Ocean kingdom to this castle. Yuuri: Oh, no...! If things keep going like this, Gakuto-sama's heart will be taken away from us...! DLovers: The time has come for us to unite together. The faithful servants of love, Dark Lovers Sortie! ---------------------- [2-page spread] Hanon: But Luchia bought *such* a swimsuit! Rina: Really. Luchia: But that's because Hanon said that a normal swimsuit wouldn't help me win! [small text] You recommended it to me, Hanon. Luchia: Argh, take that! Hanon: Bu--! Now you've done it! Rina: Hey now, hey now. Hanon: And here's something in return! Rina: ! Rina: Why'd you have to hit me, Hanon?! New girl: ...Them again. I thought I detected the presence of pearls, but in a place like this... I've got a good feeling about this. ---------------------- New girl: (3) (3) [The new girl calls Noel "ane," which means that Noel is the elder twin.] ---------------------- New girl: ** Hippo: Aah... I can't tell them that I lost the Pearl Radar. When they get back, I have to hurry and search for it, or else... ---------------------- Hanon: I knew it, we're the best ones here! Rina: You're doing it again... Beach People: [small text] Those girls are so cute! Wow, they're hot! Luchia: Sign: Miss Mermaid Contest Participants Booth Johnny: Luchia-chan! I knew it, you're a contestant! Rina: Who's that guy? [small text] He sure is acting familiar with her. Hanon: Isn't he good-looking? ---------------------- Boy: Hey, Kaito! Look at that girl! [small text] Isn't she cute? Johnny: [small text] You're cute, aren't you? There's no mistake, you're definitely Miss Mermaid! ** ---------------------- Kaito: What are you doing? Luchia: Kaito: Do you feel like you've already won? Johnny: ...Hun. Luchia: Thank you Kai... Kaito: Really, what WERE you doing?! Luchia: But, Kaito, you told me last year that you would have liked a swimsuit like this... Kaito: Eh? Kaito: ...Aah. I do like it. Luchia: ! Luchia: Pervert!! Kaito: A ha ha! It really suits you. I'll cheer for you! ---------------------- Announcer: All right, the pichi pichi summer opening Surfing Beauty Contest 2003, START! Boy: They sure are weird-looking. ** Izuuru: My love is deeper than the deepest ocean... I'm Izuuru. Judges: She looks dark and dismal! Eriru: Spinning spinning Eriru! Two-faced Erirunrun! Judges: Moron! ---------------------- Yuuri: Yuuri is not a child. Judges: Is somebody in the audience looking for a lost child--? Maria: We have come because we detected the presence of the pearls! We're not here to participate in anything like-- Judges: Ooh, the next entry is a blonde beauty?! Maria: I'm Maria. My talent is enchanting poses. Judges: Didn't you see the age restriction? [small text] Maybe this year's contest is no good. ** Announcer: Now take another look! The final remaining contestants are these three! Number fifty-two, Tourin Rina-chan! Number fifty-three, Nanami Luchia-chan! Number fifty-four, Houshou Hanon-chan! These three friends entered together! ---------------------- Luchia: Announcer: Johnny Kawamoto is at the top of the preliminary trials! Luchia: Hanon: Stupid, stupid, what do you think you're doing?! [small text] Smile, smile! Luchia: Ah! Announcer: Ooh, Doumoto Kaito has received top marks and taken over the lead. He's fantastic!! Luchia: Uwa... ---------------------- Luchia: Kyaaaa---!! Kaito, you're awesome! Luchia: Ah! Audience: ...... Announcer: WE HAVE A WINNER---!! Luchia: Iyaa~~n! Hanon: Well, we're beaten. Rina: That idiot... ---------------------- Izuuru: Ooh...! That's shameless! Maria: Why weren't we good enough?! Eriru: It's such a heartbreak~~! Yuuri: This is too troublesome. Come out mermaids, come on out and fight! DLovers: LOVERS ORCHESTRA! Johnny: Ah...! Kaito: Uwa...! ---------------------- Luchia: Why did you all try to enter? Luchia: Is it because you lost the contest that you're lashing out with your clumsy hearts? We'll extend you an invitation, to our pichi pichi voice Esthétique Concert! ** ---------------------- DLovers: We're a little bit different today from the usual. DARK LOVERS ORCHESTRA!! Luchia: Ku... Luchia: Voice: PURPLE PEARL VOICE!! ---------------------- PPVoice: CUTIE HOT PITCH!! Izuuru: Ku...! Maria: Kyaa! DLovers: A new princess...! Of all the nerve...!! ---------------------- Luchia: ...That was amazing...! I knew it, you really were a princess! Hanon: Now you'll become our friend, won't you?! PPVoice: ...Who is?! Luchia: PPVoice: It's your fault that Noel was captured! ---------------------- Luchia: Eh...! But everyone has to combine their powers together! Aqua Regina said... PPVoice: Do you believe in Aqua Regina? PPVoice: Can Aqua Regina, or any of you, say that you did anything to help Noel? I'm going to save Noel by myself...! PPVoice: I can't believe in any of you. ---------------------- Announcer: At last, it's time for the final contest!! Kaito: Ku... Luchia: Kaito... Johnny: It's reckless for you to keep going with your leg like that! Kaito: I-diot. I can't quit just for something like this. Johnny: Forget about our bet, this is dangerous... Kaito: I'm not quitting because of a little danger! ** ---------------------- Kaito: Because I'm definitely going to be the champion! Believe in me! Luchia: <"I can't believe in any of you."> Johnny: "Believe in me," he said... That's impossible! With his leg like that... If he has an accident in the final round, he might not be able to surf any- more at all--! Luchia: Oh, no...! ---------------------- Kaito: Ku... Announcer: Ooh, it's a dangerously big wave!! ** Announcer: Can Doumoto Kaito ride it?! ** ---------------------- Luchia: ---------------------- Announcer: ...We have our champion---! Johnny: Geez... I can't beat him. Luchia: Luchia: ---------------------- Kaito: Didn't I tell you to believe in me? Luchia: <...Congratulations, Kaito.> Announcer: And now, a kiss from Miss Mermaid! Luchia: **